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when I opened my eyes,
everything had changed.



people smiled & laughed &
they looked through me
as 1 looks through a
stained glass window.

my eyes were raw,
my skin was shiny & new.



I woke
and I was no longer needed



but I was wanted
& that was my happiness.
This is sort of inspired by a character who belongs to a story I may never write and has no name so is called 406...

I was listening to a song the other day that taught me a lot about their relationship with their brother, and so I guess it hung around.

By the way, no, they were not in a coma and do not have missing memories.

(c) :iconwei-en:

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amelinefer Jan 20, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful


Deep 


Meaningful.
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yaoidragon96 Mar 9, 2013  Student Writer
very interestin, im trying to compute it in my mind to what it could mean, did the amount of space bewteen lines have any significance?
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:iconwei-en:
The larger number of blank lines breaks up thoughts. Think of it as if there is a little person telling a story, and every so often they get so lost that their mind wanders. When they resume their story, it's half a continuation and half a new start, if you know what I mean.

That's not exactly what's happening, but it's similar.
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yaoidragon96 Mar 11, 2013  Student Writer
ahh, like i thought and that is very insightful.
i think its a great method of writing and for 2 reasons:

1) it makes your writing seem less to read

2)it emphasizes your words and brings more focus to what your reading :D
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yaoidragon96 Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
you are very welcome :D
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:iconthetenthsword:
This is beautiful! I literally read this with my mouth half open
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:iconwei-en:
Thank you very much!
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