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when the moon
blinked / he saw

me, angry /
but not mad / i

have stars under
my tongue / i
won’t swallow /

and my bones peek
through, they have
mind /

they are the fire

of the surface ///
Or rather, 'is already disturbed' :P

I wrote this as a summary for my quixotic series, which has a...nonsensical sort of theme. 

100 themes challenge : LXIII
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emsoileau Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
you know, the slashes make me hear a kind of fast clicking between the lines and i like it.
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wei-en Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2016
I'm glad you enjoyed it hehe
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cullyferg2010 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016
63?  That's my age.
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wei-en Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016
ahahah did the poem suit you, then?
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MoonshineChild Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016
Lovely!
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wei-en Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016
Thank you!
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